The bar chart below shows the average Australian water consumption in selected cities for last year. The pie chart shows the distribution of Australian water consumption for last year.
The given bar chart represents the average consumption of
water
in six selected cities of Australia during the last
previous year, and the supplied pie chart states the proportion of each destination of Australian Correct word choice
apply
water
distribution for the last
year similarly
.
Overall
, it is obviousely
detectable that Perth was the highest Correct your spelling
obviously
water
consumer city, while
Canberra was the lowest one among selected areas. Agricultural activities were the most places which have used water
and mining have
consumed the least amount of Unnecessary verb
apply
water
in Australia.
Focusing on details reveals that the
Perth's residents use roughly 300 Kiloliter of Correct article usage
apply
water
annually per each property, and Conberrians by less than 150 Killoliter
per building in one year was the less Correct your spelling
Kiloliter
water
consumer. Brisbane, Adelaide, Sydney, and Melbourne with 250, nearly 240, 200, and slightly less than 150 kiloliter
per property were in the next places for Change to a plural noun
kiloliters
anuulaly
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annual
water
usage, respectively.
Diving in
more Change preposition
into
details
shows that 2% of whole distributed Fix the agreement mistake
detail
water
in Australia was used for mining which was
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apply
recieved
the lowest proportion. Agricultural usage had 67 per cent shares of total Correct your spelling
received
water
in
among all Austrailian Change preposition
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sectores
. Correct your spelling
sectors
Household
stand Fix the agreement mistake
Households
at
third place to Change preposition
in
recieve
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receive
water
shares, with 9%. Fourtheen
per cent of Correct your spelling
Four
total
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the total
amonut
of Correct your spelling
amount
water
was sent to Water
and wastewater Correct article usage
the Water
managment
sections Correct your spelling
management
along with
power supliers
. And a summation of distributed Correct your spelling
suppliers
supplies
water
to manufacturing and other industries was 8%.Submitted by enayatollahi.at on
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