The diagram below shows the stages in the recycling of aluminium drinks cans.
The process diagram displays the steps in the recycling of
aluminium
drinking bottles.
Overall
, there are 3 stages as
collecting, recycling and Change preposition
apply
aluminium
recycling, only
1 Correct word choice
and only
resourse
like Correct your spelling
resource
resources
aluminium
drinking cans
. And one facility, which involves processes like melting, making new aluminium
, aluminium
roll and making a new
Correct the article-noun agreement
new cans
a new can
cans
.
The stages of recycling begun
, with collecting these Wrong verb form
began
aluminium
cans
. These collected cans
are reported to the special recycling centre by the special reporting van. Then
, in the recycling centre that
old Correct determiner usage
the
aluminium
are
melted down and Change the verb form
is
being
prepared to make Unnecessary verb
apply
a new
Correct the article-noun agreement
new cans
a new can
cans
.
After old aluminium
was melted down we have a new aluminium
. Aluminium
roll is made from new Correct article usage
The aluminium
aluminium
. New cans
is
made from Change the verb form
are
the
special Correct article usage
a
aluminium
roll. And after all that process, we have new aluminium
cans
ready to use.Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
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