Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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believe strict

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essential in order to rule out

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the

road

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others assume

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making

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it is way much better to enhance

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safety

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the

road

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road

's environmental

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are

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important to reduce any

accident

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accidents

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. On one hand, strict punishments

while

driving will allow

people

to avoid

doing

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violation

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violations

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regarding

the

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traffic

that eventually can cause harm effects to the surrounding population forward, and building

rules

to protect the

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will genuinely help them

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feel

more safe

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while

doing their daily activities.

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for

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due to

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a safe ecosystem for

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sidewalkers

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but

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they can able to protect themselves from any harmful situation in the

road

ahead.

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people

tend to pick fixing some

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for safety purposes preferred so much. Having a good facility

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sign for

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, wider space for

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sidewalks

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and

driver

, and

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giving better travel experiences would be a good

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to make both of them feel more convenient.

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number of

traffic

in some areas, particularly in the cities.

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the

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capital city like Indonesia has

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of

traffic

everywhere

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of facilities for the

driver

,

however

,

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could

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if the government chose to put more attention

for

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to

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improving

road

safety,

also

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will

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be beneficial for the environment in a long term. In conclusion, I still stick with the assumption

of

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carrying out changes along the

road

will

beneficial

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in

a

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long term

instead

of stricter

rules

to drive for

people

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reduces

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traffic

for

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some places and

be

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convenient in some way for each

sidewalker

or

driver

. In my opinion,

people

tend to break the

rules

especially when they

do

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not really convinced by their way

while

driving home.