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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People should read only those books that are about real events, real people, and established facts. Use specific reasons and details to support your opinion.

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Some say humans ought to only read books which
tells
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 non-fiction
stories
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 because they think it is the best
way
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 of education, I believe literature
consist
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 of
wide
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 range of options and
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 we should
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 consume fictional
stories
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 to achieve the maximum benefit. Many think the best
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 to educate ourselves is
learning
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 more about
the
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past events and figures. Those people think the real purpose of reading and literature is to widen our knowledge in
life
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. By gathering small pieces of information
which
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made by real individuals and countries from
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 kind of
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, we can learn useful
life
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 lessons and use them to prevent certain risks in
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, a book named "My Marriages" sold 1 million copies more than its fictional alternative "Why Did All My Marriages End" because people want to spot the true reasons and be informed about the real
stories
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, I do not think true
stories
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 prepare
ourselves
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to
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 happenings that we might not want to experience in
life
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 because the main character or the historical happening may be totally different from our
life
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 and
by
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only reading these books may limit the
usefullness
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usefulness
 we hope to get from them. Others find reading different types of books is the best
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 to learn from written products. The subjects in a science fiction history book might
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happen
in
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 another planet and still can give us valuable
life
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 lessons about relationships or society.
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, the writers may want to give the lessons they want to give in their work by isolating the events from
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life
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 happenings or rules and
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 can only be considered as their style, I believe . Take Avatar the
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, despite being one of the most popular fictional series in the world, especially adults find it highly educative since it is full of guidance about values for humans and I think the fictional part of a story is truly independent
from
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 its guidance on people.
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,
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 written works which consist of past events may be a great
way
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 to learn from, I believe in order to widen our perception, we should read without
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 about whether it is based on a real story or
imagination
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the imagination
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 of the writer so that we can explore from a wider range of options.

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The essay is logically structured, making it easier for the reader to follow your argument.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

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