The responsibility to prevent global environmental damage is on politicians rather than individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,

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environment is

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issue all over the world. Some

people

believe that

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is the control responsibility of politicians

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rather

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than individuals. I disagree with

this

statement

both

are equally responsible. In

this

essay, I will explain the reasons with

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.

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with, why politicians

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important. They are part of any government, they can easily

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to

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the

people

and guide them

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to

reduced

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. They are providing some extra discounts on

less

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pollution products like

as

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Electric vehicles

car

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,

bikes

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. It is banned the

product

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products

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like

as

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plastic and more damage

the

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environment.

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, during corona pandemic weather is totally cleared and visibility is so far

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because

that

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time all

the

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vehicle

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or industries

are

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closed.

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people

breathe

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a

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good air quality.

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, If the government

is released

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the

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any policy

but

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people

are

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not

following

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this

waste of money and time. If the

people

are doing individual

then

some

people

are participating to support him.

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are starting first at their own

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.

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is stop to

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using plastic,

chemical

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products.

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trying to reduce personal vehicles and

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to

used

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government

transports

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,

its

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help

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reduces

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the

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pollution.

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, many countries

are

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already banned pesticide and guide

to

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people

and motivate used natural products. In conclusion, I have explained

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both

views and

find it

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this

solution. If they are doing

both

on

single

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basis,

then

this

is not

benefit

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for

both

. If

both

are

doing

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together the result Is better.