The bar chart below illustrates five different industries’ percentage share of Brazil’s economy in 2009 and 2019 with a forecast for 2029. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart provides key information about five industries, which support the economic status in Brazil across three different years. The units are measured in percentages.

Overall

, it can be seen that

finance

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the finance

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sector is the most significant one, as it provides the highest ratio of

shares

to the economy throughout the given time.

In addition

, finance accounted for the biggest proportion of

shares

,in 2019,

whereas

the lowest percentage of

shares

was

due to

manufacturing in the same year.

According to

what is shown, finance started, at roughly 32%, in 2009 and increased gradually to just over 35%, in 2019. After that, it is expected to

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to about 42%, in 2029. Food processing contributed by around 20% of

shares

, in 2020, which was about twice

than

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its ratio, in 2009.

In addition

, it is predicted to decline to approximately 10%, in 2029. In terms of oil, coal and gas, they represented about a third percentage of

shares

around 33%, in 2019, which was higher than its

shares

, in 2009 by

nealy

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nearly

7%.

Also

, it is expected to drop again to 25%, in 2029.