The graph below gives information about international tourist arrivals in five countries. USA,France, malaysia, Brazil and Egypt
The given chart illustrates how international
tourists
arrived in five countries namely the USA, France, Malaysia, Brazil and Egypt.Use synonyms
Overall
, I see the number of Linking Words
tourists
in the USA is the highest in the whole process. The rest of the tourist arrivals in these countries increased over time.
As the data suggested, 70 Use synonyms
million
international Use synonyms
tourists
travelled to the USA in 1995 and increased by 90 Use synonyms
million
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at the end
of the period. Tourist arrival in France aimed at over 30 Linking Words
million
at the beginning of the period, ranked second but surpassed the highest level Use synonyms
at the end
of the period
tourist arrival in Malaysia is approximately between 20 and 40 Linking Words
million
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tourists
over the 5- years, ranked third.And the features for Brazil and Egypt were lowest at about under 10 Use synonyms
million
and the data for Egypt was small higher than Brazil Use synonyms
at the end
of the beginningLinking Words
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