Nowadays many new city established in many
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. It is necessary to make
parks
and
sports
for people's
leisure
time
. I agree with
this
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because public
parks
get
opportunityAdd an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
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to walk,
play and enjoy
leisure
timesFix the agreement mistake
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.
Besides
, individual
sports
give
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chancesFix the agreement mistake
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to
feetCorrect your spelling
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our-self,
knowCorrect word choice
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various
sports
.
Firstly
, public
parks
give us
opportunityAdd an article
the opportunity
an opportunity
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to walk,
children
play and enjoy
leisure
timesFix the agreement mistake
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. Public
parks
give us a wide area to walk in our free
time
which is a great scope to keep peace our mind.
Besides
, it is a common place where every
agesChange to a singular noun
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children
come
for playingChange preposition
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with their friends.
no other chance is as good as like
parkAdd an article
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to emphasize the beauty of nature, which
enjoy
theirChange preposition
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leisure
time
. A survey
conductedAdd a missing verb
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with the '
Children
Growth
Foundation'Change noun form
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in Change preposition
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year and
they Correct pronoun usage
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found that almost 45%
childrenChange preposition
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came to their nearest park with their parents during
leisureCorrect pronoun usage
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time
.
Moreover
, individual
sports
give the
chancesFix the agreement mistake
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to keep feet and know
to Change preposition
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other
sports
. It is
theCorrect article usage
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great opportunity to enjoy and keep
fitnessReplace the word
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both during free
time
.
Furthermore
,
Children
and young boys introduced themself
withChange preposition
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various
sports
and
also
passingVerb problem
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some
time
with
thatCorrect determiner usage
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games which they
likeWrong verb form
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most. By individual
people get the chance to
increasedChange the form of the verb
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their creativity in their free
time
.
In conclusion, public
parkFix the agreement mistake
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getsVerb problem
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the scope to enjoy people's
leisure
time
with playChange preposition
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,
walkWrong verb form
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and gaining
the Correct article usage
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natural beauty.
Besides
individual
sports
keep
peoplesChange the noun form
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fitnessReplace the word
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by
play withWrong verb form
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various types of games which they
likedWrong verb form
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most.