The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs illustrate Canada's and Australia's marital status of their habitats. Both charts are divided into four identical categories, except there are additional groups of marriage between
same sex
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and never married people in Canada’s information.
While
a list of single individuals is in the chart of Australia.
Overall
, it is apparent that couples who are separated but not divorced occupied more than the half of chart in Canada’s survey,
whereas
, in Australia’s data, the number of marriages is the highest which is slightly bigger than the separated couples.
By contrast
, people who are divorced are the least components in both graphs capturing less than 3 percent.
Furthermore
, engaged individuals in Canada are two times less than the couples who are split up. After that, the amount of citizens who are widowed and never married
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equal in Canada.
In addition
, engagement among the same sex fills the 3
percent
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of the graph.
Subsequently
, single and widowed people’s total have a difference of only one percentage.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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