The charts below show the main reasons why students chose a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

The chart gives information on the main purpose of why students select a particular university in the UK, in 1997 and 2007.

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, students chose more suitable degree courses , which were dominant. In 1987, the quality of sports started at just 21 % but it was followed by a slight decrease to 17 % in 2007. The suitable degree courses in 1987 were 35 % and

then

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rose to 37 % in 2007. In 1987, the close to their parental home started at just 10 %

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this

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figure increased to 22 % in 2007. The quality of teaching was 15 % in 1987 , after which it grew

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to 18 % in 2007.

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, when it comes to the good sports and social activities was 19 % but

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was followed by a notable decrease to 6 % in 2007.

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Apr 4, 2024

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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.

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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

143 words

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