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the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.

the charts below give information on the ages of the populations of yemen and italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. summarize the information and make comparison. wrtie at least 150 words.
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the given chart depicts the percentage of populations of
Yemen
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 and Italy in 2000 and estimates the figure in 2050.
Overall
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, it can be seen that
people
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 aged 15-59
years
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 are predicted to be the vast majority of the population in Italy and
Yemen
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 in 2050.
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,
while
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 the overwhelming majority of
population
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the population
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 in Italy was
people
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 aged 15-59
years
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,
this
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 figure in
Yemen
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 was
people
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 aged 0-14
years
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 in 2000.
To begin
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 with, in
Yemen
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,
people
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 who were 0-14
years
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 old ranked first with 50.1% and
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 group is estimated
that
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to
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 decrease to 37% in 2050.
Next,
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15-59
years
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 old individuals occupied 46.3% in 2000 and they are predicted to expand largely to 57.3% in 2050.
Lastly
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,
people
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 aged 60+
years
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 accounted for 3.6% in 2000 and
this
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 figure is estimated a increase to 5.7% in 2050. Moving on to the other categories, the proportion of
people
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 who were 15-59
years
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 old took up 61.6% in 2000 and it is predicted that will decrease 46.2% in 2050.
People
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 aged 60+
years
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 made up 24.1% in 2000 and it is estimated that will rise almost twice in 2050.
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, the percentage of
people
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 aged 0-14
years
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 is estimated that will decrease by around 3% in 2050 from 14.3% in 2000.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "lastly".
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words yemen, people, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 3 times.
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