The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicted above provides the monthly average price fluctuations of
copper
, nickel and zinc throughout the year
2014.
From an overall
perspective, we can observe that all metals experienced a decrease initially
in the first 4-5 months. However
, in the last
3-2 months of the year
, all metals’ prices returned to soar.
Nickel exhibited the highest percentage in January, followed by a continuous decrease in the subsequent months until it rose again in July, maintaining stability until September. However
, nickel experienced a slight decline in October before showing an increase in November, which the figure maintained until the end of the year
. Almost identical, copper
denoted a progressive decline until May and remained stagnant until June. In the following month
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month,
copper
slightly rose and remained stable until September. During October and November
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November,
copper
experienced a stable decline and showed a tiny raise
in December. Correct your spelling
rise
However
, zinc began the year
with the lowest percentage and wrapped up the year
with the highest position among all metals.Submitted by syarahfatiha321 on
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