The graph shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph depicted above provides the monthly average price fluctuations of
copper
, nickel and zinc throughout the Use synonyms
year
2014.
From an Use synonyms
overall
perspective, we can observe that all metals experienced a decrease Linking Words
initially
in the first 4-5 months. Linking Words
However
, in the Linking Words
last
3-2 months of the Linking Words
year
, all metals’ prices returned to soar.
Nickel exhibited the highest percentage in January, followed by a continuous decrease in the subsequent months until it rose again in July, maintaining stability until September. Use synonyms
However
, nickel experienced a slight decline in October before showing an increase in November, which the figure maintained until the end of the Linking Words
year
. Almost identical, Use synonyms
copper
denoted a progressive decline until May and remained stagnant until June. In the following Use synonyms
month
Add a comma
month,
copper
slightly rose and remained stable until September. During October and Use synonyms
November
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November,
copper
experienced a stable decline and showed a tiny Use synonyms
raise
in December. Correct your spelling
rise
However
, zinc began the Linking Words
year
with the lowest percentage and wrapped up the Use synonyms
year
with the highest position among all metals.Use synonyms
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