Write about the following topic: In many countries today there are many highly qualified graduates without employment. What factors may have caused this situation and what, in your opinion, can/should be done about it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Across the globe,
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the unemplyment
unemplyment
rate is growing day by day. Correct your spelling
unemployment
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eassy
argues that there are many literate Correct your spelling
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easy
person
available whose graduation Change to a plural noun
people
level
are higher than many average Fix the agreement mistake
levels
people
and yet not getting ant
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a
job
. The two main reasons of
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for
this
problem are lack of practical experience
and not fulfilling the requirements of job
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the job
market
.
First and foremost, most of the student's target is to get the certificate from the institution just to get a job
which is the main reason not
getting the real skill by completing graduation that the Change preposition
for not
job
market
needs. Aditionally
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Additionally
graduation
certificate is just a show off for Correct article usage
a graduation
the
students nowadays to get some respect in Correct article usage
apply
this
society which is reallly
not Correct your spelling
really
valueable
if they don't apply the Correct your spelling
valuable
thing
they learned in their practical life. Fix the agreement mistake
things
For instance
, a higher proportion of unemployed peoples
blame the government for Fix the agreement mistake
people
this
problem whereas
they are mostly responsible for their own lackings which is like the people
who can't dance, but blames
the floor for that.
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blame
Secondly
, major
part of unemployed Add an article
a major
the major
people
thinks
that just a higher level certificate is needed to get a good Correct subject-verb agreement
think
job
by not researching the job
market
. Moreover
, they just deny the job
of lower salary & the opportunity of having an unpaid internship. However
, they are not concerned about their future which makes them to losing
the opportunity of gaining Wrong verb form
lose
experince
on their own. Correct your spelling
experience
For instance
, nearlly
all of the company with high Correct your spelling
nearly
salary
requires Fix the agreement mistake
salaries
minimum
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a minimum
2
years of Change preposition
of 2
job
experience
which is not suitable for the
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apply
people
who aren't eager to gain experience
from a low salary
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low-salary
providing
company.
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apply
To conclude
, lack of experience
in their job
field and not matching the profile of the job
market
required are the main reasons of
not getting jobs.Change preposition
for
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