You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come

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Dear Patel The purpose of inscribing

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missive is to let you know that I am Ranvir Singh, your new neighbour. I purchased

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home which is around the corner of your livinghood. Well, I am a self-employed person and working as a Product Owner for an International firm. We are a family of four members with two kids. We are planning to organise an inauguration

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at my abode. Actually, we made a plan to throw

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party

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weekend 7th April. The theme of the

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Pungabi

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Punjabi

. All the

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attendees

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are asked to wear Punjabi costumes and there will be

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party

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as well. Just hoping that you will tolerate

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us in the matter of noise level.

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; we will set the volume that will not be audible to outside people.

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, there will be scrumptious Punjabi

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for the guests. I hope you will have some time to attend the celebration

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weekend from 4 p.m. to 8 p.m. I am eagerly anticipating to meet you and your family. Until

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, I hope you have

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time. Thank you in advance and waiting for your prompt reply! Yours Sincerely Ranvir Singh

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structure

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea for clearer structure.

conclusion

Consider a brief conclusion to end your letter more smoothly.

grammar & spelling

Review for minor grammatical or spelling inconsistencies to enhance readability.

details

Including specific details about the party (e.g., activities, menu items) enhances engagement and clarity.

introduction

You've introduced yourself and your family in a friendly tone, setting a good opening for the letter.

invitation detail

The plan for the party, including the theme and attire, adds a personalized touch to your invitation, making it more appealing.

consideration & invitation

Your consideration for the noise level and invitation to your neighbor shows thoughtfulness and inclusivity.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

198 words

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