The line graph shows the average number of weekly patients visiting four clinics of a hospital from 2010 to 2016.
The line graph shows the typical weekly data of visitors who saw the doctor in four different clinics of a hospital between 2010 and 2016.
Overall
, the number of patients for two clinics such
as dental and diabetic increased gradually, while
visitors for eye control rapidly grew up throughout the period. It is also
clear that the figure for people for birth control
almost unchanged.Add a verb
control is
control was
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