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The graph shows information about the amount of average
monuthly
change prices which was changed of the three metals during 2014.
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monthly
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,what stand
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our
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out
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trends in the average prices of all of them.another interesting point is that nickel was the most popular in Add a hyphen
fall-over
firstly
2014.but in
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copper
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the copper
price
started at 2% on
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in
january
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January
then
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the
december
.if we look at zinc Change the capitalization
December
price
the trend srated
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rated
stated
on
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in
january
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January
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rosed dramatically to 3% on febuary
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February
then
changing price
dropped until
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to
october
fallow that increased Change the capitalization
October
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to 2
last
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a peak
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at
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next plummeted gradually to 1% on nevember
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November
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remained
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the two
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months
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