Birth
rates are falling down in some countries and experts forecast that in 2050 aged people far more than
children
under 15.
This
essay
firstlyChange the word
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sayChange the verb form
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that
population
fall
will Verb problem
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might be a
problem
in
future
and
then
stateCorrect subject-verb agreement
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that
population
growth
is the probable
solution
.
In the beginning,
population
fall might
be showChange the verb form
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as a
problem
in
future
. If the
population
growth
stopCorrect subject-verb agreement
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, the
future
will scarry. It will impact the
population
, in
future
the
population
growth
may decrease dramatically, lack of young generation may be
there Correct pronoun usage
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are shortage of willpower and
worker Fix the agreement mistake
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.
Besides
, the work field or job sector falling the shortage of working power and
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hireWrong verb form
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workerFix the agreement mistake
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from other countries which
give Verb problem
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impactCorrect subject-verb agreement
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on
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financialCorrect article usage
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sector as many
currencyChange to a plural noun
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goes out
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fromChange preposition
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countryCorrect article usage
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.
For instance
: A survey
conductWrong verb form
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withChange preposition
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HumanCorrect article usage
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birth organizationCorrect your spelling
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they Correct pronoun usage
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found that
lackCorrect article usage
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of
population
growth
may
destroyedChange the verb form
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a nation in
future
. Uganda
cast Verb problem
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and
it'sCorrect your spelling
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population
isCorrect subject-verb agreement
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a great example for everyone.
However
,
population
growth
is the probable
solution
forChange preposition
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this
problem
.
MotherFix the agreement mistake
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encourageWrong verb form
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to give
birth
childrenChange preposition
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and
this
is the only
one Correct pronoun usage
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solution
. Nowadays
modernCorrect article usage
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generation
notAdd a missing verb
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interested
to giveChange preposition
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birth
moreChange preposition
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children
than one but it is dangerous for
populationCorrect article usage
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rate
. If everyone
shouldVerb problem
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encourageWrong verb form
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to give
birth
moreChange preposition
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children
the
rate
increase gradually and may
fill-upCorrect your spelling
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the
desireReplace the word
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rate
in
future
.
In conclusion,
while
the
population
rate
faceChange the verb form
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the
problem
Change preposition
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asCorrect your spelling
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decreased
population
rate
but Correct word choice
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the primary
solution
is
thatChange preposition
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givingWrong verb form
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birth
moreChange preposition
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children
than one
and Correct word choice
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it Correct pronoun usage
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help to
over comeCorrect your spelling
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the
problem
.