The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The given two pie charts illustrate the devices each between 18 and 25 age types utilized to watch
TV
channels in Canada in the years 2009 and 2019.
Looking at the overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that all types of tech items have undergone big changes for a decade.
Firstly
, a cursory glance at the data reveals that the conventional TV
was the biggest for the year 2009 consisting of over a quarter (34%). Also
, Laptop, Desktop, and Smartphone was
similar rates and the rates were 20%,18%, and 15%, respectively. Less than 10% young generation used Screen Change the verb form
were
TV
,
and Remove the comma
apply
Tablet
.
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Tablets
In addition
, another eye-catching change is that the Conventional
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number of Conventional
TV
users dramatically reduced from 34% to 4% and it was the smallest proportion in 2019. The Flat-scereen
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Flat-screen
TV
and mobile ratio sustainably soared and there were 27% and 26%, each. Moreover
, both the Desktop and Laptop accounting
for 12%. Replace the word
account
Additionally
, the people
who use the tablet gradually rose up by 5% to 19%.Correct quantifier usage
number of people
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