The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the percentages of tourists who used different types of transport to travel within a particular nation between 1989 and 2009. Each tourist may have used more than one type of transport. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the proportion of people who
traveled
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travelled
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in
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a certain nation by using different ways of transport from 1989 to 2009.
Overall
,
it is clear that
taking trains and coaches were increasing. The people who took planes
was
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dropping. The number of cars used for tours grew in
first
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a first
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10-year period and fell in the next
ten
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10
years. An upward can be seen in ferry taking.
However
, it declined slightly during the
last
five years. Looking at the chart more closely, one can see that the rail category gained the largest percentages in
this
diagram, and the figure was approximately 25%. The second biggest was the type of coach, and it increased by around 18%. Air traffic is the style that lost about 17% eventually. The group of
ferry
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went up steadily and slowly, and ended at 9%. In the beginning, it was the lowest method, but in the end, it was still the way people did not like to use it. In 1989,
car
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the car
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was the
favorite
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transportation, but in 2009, the rail system replaced that place.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • transportation modes
  • tourists' preferences
  • over a period of time
  • to travel within
  • fluctuations
  • a steady increase/decrease
  • peaked at
  • declined to
  • remained stable
  • witnessed
  • a surge in popularity
  • gradual
  • significant
  • predominant
  • comparative analysis
  • in comparison to
  • a shift towards
  • to utilize
  • car hire/rental
  • public transportation
  • cycling
  • domestic flights
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