The line graph illustrates the amount of electricity produced in France from 1980 to 2010. Overall, electricity production from nuclear power was highest, whereas the production of electricity from renewable energy was lowest.

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electricity of four kinds of sources (Thermal, Nuclear, Hydroelectric,

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and Renewables

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) in 40 years starting from 1980 in France. Unit is measured in terawatt hours.

Overall

, the amount of thermal, hydroelectric and renewables stabilised over the period given

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nuclear moved upward slightly. At the start of the period, terminal was the most popular source in France which was replaced by nuclear in nearly 1985 and following years nuclear stayed popular over the time presented. With regards to the amount of nuclear produced, it began at just above 60 terawatts per

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hour and

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it reached

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its own peak in nearly 2005 at approximately 460

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per

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hour. In the

last

year, it started to decrease dramatically.

On the other hand

, the production of thermal, hydroelectric and

renewables

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energy remained stable over

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time. Between 1980 and 2010 production of thermal and hydroelectric fluctuated rapidly

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hydroelectric increased very slowly.

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they were around

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60 terawatt in the

last

year 2010.