The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The pie charts illustrate the proportion of devices
people
between the ages of 18 to 25 years old utilized to watch TV
programs in Canada in the years 2009 and 2019.
According to
the information, it can be seen that the conventional TV
is the most popular choice compared to the other gadgets in 2009. However
, people
in 2019 choose
the mobile phone and the flat-screen Wrong verb form
chose
TV
as their main resources.
In 2009, people
between 18 to 25 age selected the conventional TV
to watch the programs which was occupied by 34%. Lapton came the second place with 20%. Moreover
, the
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tablet
and flat-screen Fix the agreement mistake
tablets
TV
were not popular at that time, only 5% and 8% respectively.
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TVs
On the other hand
, both flat-screen TV
and mobile Fix the agreement mistake
TVs
phone
were the best choices for Fix the agreement mistake
phones
this
group of people
, with about 27% and 26%, almost the same amount of usage. While
the conventional TV
dropped to only 4%. The desktop computer was used to watch TV
channels at 12% same as the laptop.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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