Over the last few decades, the media has promoted the image of young tin women as being ideal. What problems has this caused? What solutions can you suggest to this issue?

there are many

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people

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that thin

female

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females

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is

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the ideal females which

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mainly promoted by the modern media.

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essay

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delve into the problem caused by

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trend and suggest some practical

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solutions

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to address

this

issue. First and foremost, one of the obvious problems caused by

this

trend is unhealthy dieting is on the increase.

In other words

, many young females are starving to

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weight and become thin,

as a consequence

, they are in the clutches of illness.

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, a new young model

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due to

the

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overfasting

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overfishing

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over fasting

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several days and

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protein

that is

essential for

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body

maintenance.

similarly

,

fat

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fat-body

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body

women are being insulted and

body shamed

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. The

poeple

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people

have

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a misconsumption

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misconsumption

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misconception

that fat

body

is

due to

the intake of

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food consumption, in turn, these fat young females are insulted publically and private parties become commonplace.

Nevertheless

, there are some practical

solution

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solutions

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to tackle

this

issue to a great

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.

Firstly

, proper guidance should be provided for

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young people to diet and

loose

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lose

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body

weight. In detail, health education should be provided by not only health authorities but

also

universitites

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universities

. The awareness

for

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the

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proper dieting would reduce

this

issue. The authorities should

be

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make strict laws and guidance to

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the medias

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medias

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media

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about

body

shaming and harassment. By

doint

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doing

this

the mental harassment

for

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fat women can be reduced significantly. In conclusion, unhealthy dieting is one of the main

diadavantage

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disadvantages

of the thin-

body

fashion concept.

similarly

, mental harassment is

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another negative effect of

this

trend. Ergo, proper diet education and implementation of strict laws are the practical solutions to address

this

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issues.