Nowadays there is a lot of
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that
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only women
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responsible for having whether or not
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also
, they
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more
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for taking care of them. In my opinion, I partly agree with
this
suggestion and I will give some examples in the
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of
this
essay.
Firstly
, gender inequality still exists in
this
modern
society
. In
this
kind of
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we can see in the hiring to
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. Many companies still prefer men for some type of work rather than women.
For example
, when I graduated
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and went to the interview
and Correct word choice
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the first question of
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was
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“When
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planning to get married?”.
This
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of the gender inequalities we have in our Uzbek
society
and
this
society
gives more attention and opportunity
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the Manship. So
that is
why, men
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more
their Correct pronoun usage
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forChange preposition
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their
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and they don’t have time for their
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.
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addition to
this
, the men consist of the breadwinner and
this
view cannot
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for more time. They have
also
more duty to breed their family,
but Correct word choice
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not just their
children
and spouses but
also
their parents.
On the other hand
, fatherhood
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role in
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theirChange preposition
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offspring’sChange noun form
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physically and emotionally. Many researchers have proved that fatherly love is one
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important aspects
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healthy family.
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which grows up in healthy conditions
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have social problems.
Besides
they can easily find
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spot in the
society
.
For instance
, my cousin’s mother is the second wife.
FatherCorrect article usage
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of my cousin has
firstCorrect article usage
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family and
children
. He had tried to spend more
hisChange preposition
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free time with
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first family, so my cousin
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up in
this
condition and her character
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difficult. She always wants to be in the
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of the group and
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more attention from other people. She became unconfident.
Overall
, fatherhood is
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vitallyCorrect article usage
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important
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inChange preposition
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theCorrect article usage
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life, so that’s why fathers have to pay more attention
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raising and caring
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theirChange preposition
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children
as
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theirChange preposition
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mothers.