In contemporary society,
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has been a long debate about
smartphone
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impact
toChange preposition
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youngsters,
whetherCorrect word choice
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phone usage
giveChange the verb form
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advantageFix the agreement mistake
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or detrimental
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. Some societies have
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that
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gadgetFix the agreement mistake
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could impact teenager awareness performance,
while
I do not agree with
this
opinion wholeheartedly. In forthcoming paragraphs, I will
theChange preposition
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positive and negative
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of
and provide logical
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to filter the harmful
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of overly
useWrong verb form
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gadgetFix the agreement mistake
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.
First and foremost, Communication devices
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rightnow since it become a primary need for everyone and adolescents
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no
. By using
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, we can connect to the world,
for
we can read
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, watch a podcast, and catch up with the
in
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touch. If we can
use
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properly,
itCorrect pronoun usage
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can become
perfectCorrect article usage
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applianceFix the agreement mistake
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to learnChange preposition
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and improve our knowledge
.
On the other hand
, a lot of kids today
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excessive
use
of phones to access non-important
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. To exemplify, They tend to spend their time
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scrolling on
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or playing
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all day.
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to these reasons, children do not have time anymore to learn or
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a book which badly
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their literation performance. On top of that,The majority
youngstersChange preposition
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who became
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never connect with communities again which
makeCorrect subject-verb agreement
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theyCorrect pronoun usage
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have a low awareness
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the environment.
To sum up
, Mobile devices have both
effects
as well as
harmful impacts based on the way we
use
itCorrect pronoun usage
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. As a guardian, parents should teach their
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how to
use
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inChange preposition
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the right path,
such
as
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child mode. In the future, I hope proper mobile phone utilization
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should be
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in every school to guide the students.