The first diagram gives information on the quantity of books borrowed from different viilage libraries between June and September in 2014 and the second graph illustrates the proportion of types of book borrowed during this given time.
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The provided line graph gives us information about
amount
of Add an article
the amount
books
borrowing
in 4 villages (West Eaton, Wrong verb form
borrowed
Ryeslip
, Sutton Wood, Church Mount) between June and September
.
At firs
glance, the Correct your spelling
first
number
of books
borrowed in Ryeslip
decreased gradually over the time period given while
the number
of books
in West Eaton and Church Mount moved upward. The amount of borrowing in Sutton Wood experienced rapidly changing during the time given.
In
the start of time, Change preposition
At
number
of borrowing in Change the article
a number
the number
Ryeslip
was peak
at 300 Wrong verb form
peaked
books
borrowed per month
compared to other villages following months it decreased gradually and touched lowest
point Correct pronoun usage
its lowest
nearly
150 Change preposition
of nearly
books
per month
in september
.
Change the capitalization
September
On the other hand
, number
of Change the article
a number
the number
books
borrowed was
started at the same point 50 in Church Mount and West Eaton. Until Agust, they Unnecessary verb
apply
rised
slightly after increasing, they Correct your spelling
raised
rose
rise
leveled
off between Change the spelling
levelled
Agusts
and Correct your spelling
August
September
. The number
of books
borrowed in Sutton Wood moved upward slightly the following month
then
, it moved downward dramatically and it had lowest
point at 100 Correct pronoun usage
its lowest
books
borrowed per month
in Agusts
. Correct your spelling
August
After
this
decreasing
, it rocketed and expanded Replace the word
decrease
the
Correct article usage
apply
Ryeslip
's number
of books
and Correct your spelling
reached
reaches
reacheh
Correct your spelling
reached
most
borrowing village in Correct article usage
the most
Change the capitalization
September
september
at 300 Change the capitalization
September
books
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