The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010.
The bar chart
illustrate
various Change the verb form
illustrates
proportion
among estates in three different countries from 2007 to 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
proportions
it is clear that
,
Remove the comma
apply
Algeria
proportions have a downward trend Change noun form
Algeria's
while
,
chines properties experience an upward trend at the same time.
As can be seen, in 2007 Remove the comma
apply
Algeria
with over 6% stayed at first
stage, Argentina was Add an article
the first
at
Change preposition
in
second
degree Correct article usage
the second
by
3% and Change preposition
at
finally
Add a comma
finally,
china
showed third stage with 2%. In Capitalize word
China
next
year,2008, Correct article usage
the next
Algeria
saw a remarkable drop from over 6% to4.5% whereas
, china surge
to over 4% and Wrong verb form
surged
follow
Wrong verb form
followed
this
way by a noticeable increase to 5.3% in 2009 and another moderate rise had
Unnecessary verb
apply
showed
over 6% in 2010 Change the verb form
shown
however
, reduction mode continued for Algeria
with a marked dipped by about 1.5% from 4.5% to 3% in 2009 and stood at a same level in 3% with a negligible growth which was under 0.1% in 2010.
Argentina vary between 4.8% to1.2% from 2007 to 2010. During first
year, it Change the article
the first
was
showed Unnecessary verb
apply
significant
Correct article usage
a significant
climbed
Replace the word
climb
by
over 1.5% and Change preposition
of
then
experienced a dramatic fell
from 4.8% to 1.3% in Replace the word
fall
second
year. In 2010, Argentina rose to 2.3% moderately. The bar chart below shows the percentage growth in average property prices in three different countries between 2007 and 2010.Change the article
the second
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Vocabulary: Replace the words algeria with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "moderate" was used 2 times.
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