The given diagram clearly depicts the step-by-step process of carbonated drink production.
The diagram illustrates the stages involved in the soft drink production.
It is clear that
there are 5 steps in the process, beginning with preparing the Linking Words
water
for the drink, and culminating with the packaging and delivery of the finished product.
In the first stage of the process, Use synonyms
water
is put through a filter before a softener and other chemicals are added to it. Once the Use synonyms
water
has been processed, it is Use synonyms
then
pumped Linking Words
on
stage 2 where it undergoes evaporation and carbonation. During Change preposition
into
this
step, the Linking Words
water
is heated and witnessed a cooling pipe before carbon dioxide is added, creating carbonated Use synonyms
water
.
In the third stage of the process, the carbonated Use synonyms
water
is put into a mixing tank where it is mixed with colouring, flavouring, and sweetener. The resulting mixture is Use synonyms
then
filtered before being packaged into cans and bottles. Linking Words
Finally
, once the bottles and cans have been packaged into boxes, they are transported to supermarkets where they are ready to be sold.Linking Words
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