The diagram illustrates the various stages in the life of a honey bee.
The diagram illustrates the life cycle involved in the maturing of honey bees.
It is clear that
there are several steps in the process, beginning with laying the eggs, and culminating with becoming the mature insects.
In the first Linking Words
stage
of the process, the female adult lays an egg; the female typically lays one or two eggs every 3 Use synonyms
days
. Between 9 and 10 Use synonyms
days
later, each egg hatches and the immature insect, or nymph, appears.
Once the water has been processed, it is Use synonyms
then
pumped Linking Words
on
Change preposition
into
stage
2 where it undergoes evaporation and carbonation. During Use synonyms
this
step, the water is heated and witnessed a cooling pipe before carbon dioxide is added, creating carbonated water.
In the third Linking Words
stage
of the process, the nymph grows in size and sheds its skin three times. Use synonyms
This
moulting first takes place 5 Linking Words
days
after the egg hatches, Use synonyms
then
7 Linking Words
days
and 9 Use synonyms
days
respectively. After a total of 30 to 31 Use synonyms
days
from the Use synonyms
starting
of the cycle, the young adult honey bee emerges from its final moulting Replace the word
start
stage
, and in the space of only 4 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
days
it reaches full maturity.Add a comma
days,
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