You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write at least 250 words. Write about the following topic: Companies are responsible only for making money for their investors. Therefore, they should not be held accountable for the environmental and social costs of their business activity to society as a whole. Businesses should do no more than concentrate on making profit. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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Nobody would argue that the reason for the existence of enormous
corporations
and huge companies
is that they make a profit for their sponsors and shareholders. In most cases, these companies
do not take any responsibility beyond society for any environmental and social costs of their business
activities. That said these business
dealers ought to keep in mind that making money is not a crucial moment when the environment and social cost are in a poor position. As so as they are also
a part of that society.
Firstly
, it is impossible to build a business
not taking into consideration social costs. All activities of companies
are made for people as a whole. What is more, corporations
are providing their products, services, and facilities for social consumption. Selling them in the market for a high price will not be in demand in the region with a low salary, and common people cannot afford to buy what companies
are offering in the market. As a consequence
, your business
can meet with long-term detriments or even be bankrupt. However
, organizing social welfare programs in the frame of big companies
will contribute to its sustainable growth.
Next,
protecting the environment should be one of the most important requirements for firms while
producing goods, and the government also
should set regulations that oblige corporations
to environmental accountability. By way of example, factory buildings should be situated far from the living area of inhabitants, to avoid pollution resulting in health problems for the population around. The actual subject of the current geographical condition shows that protecting the environment policy is supported by green-friendly activists. Hence
, brand
image of that company will rise and start to be profitable.
In conclusion, making a profit should not be a vital agenda of company policy. Add an article
the brand
Corporations
are to follow the concept of supporting the nature they are existing at
and the people they are offering their serviceWrong verb form
exist
.
Change preposition
to.
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task achievement
Remember to clearly state your position on the topic in the introduction. This sets the tone for your essay and informs the reader about your stance on the topic.
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Make use of relevant examples to support your arguments. Detailed examples can make your essay more convincing and engaging for the reader.
coherence cohesion
Work on creating smoothly connecting paragraphs with clear and logical transitions. This will enhance the flow of your essay, making it easier for readers to follow your argument.
general
To refine your essay further, consider a more varied use of sentence structures and vocabulary. This adds to the richness of the language and demonstrates your proficiency.
task achievement
Your essay presents a well-reasoned argument, showing an understanding of the topic and offering a critical view. It works well in elaborating on the responsibilities of companies beyond just making profits.
coherence cohesion
The conclusion effectively summarizes your argument, reinforcing your stance on corporate responsibilities. This strengthens the overall cohesion of the essay.
Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Examples make your writing easier to understand by illustrating points more effectively.
Examples, if used properly, not only help you get higher marks for ‘Task Response’ but also for ‘Coherence’.
When giving examples it is best to put them after your main idea or topic sentence. They can be used in the middle of supporting sentences or they can be used to start a new sentence. There is no rule for where exactly to give examples in essays, logically they would come after your main idea/topic sentence or just after a supporting sentence.
Linking words for giving examples:
- for example
- for instance
- to illustrate this
- to give a clear example
- such as
- namely
- to illustrate
- take, for example