The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.

The map bellow show the chances that occurred to a town named Willington in 1780,1860 and 2000.
The given maps illustrate a significant change.
Overall
few areas were maintained
while
others
such
as woods and farms were replaced into something. Looking at the figures converted into something during the periods given, four farms were replaced by shops in 2000
however
still remained in 1860 only 2 farms. During these 2 years (1780 and 1860), wetlands for birds were not available,
while
in 2000 there exists at the south of the river.
Moreover
, woods did not exist in 2000 and were replaced by sports fields and
also
some schools. Regarding the figures that have
no
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changed, there were two areas namely the river and
homes
. There were only two
homes
and villages at the beginning of the period, after that enlarged significantly became two hundred
homes
and five hundred
homes
in 1860 and 2000, respectively.
Furthermore
, the shape of the river was maintained during the given periods, only slightly changed by the additional bridge in 1860 and
also
still the same
at the end
of the period.
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