The chart below shows the annual water usage by different industries.

The chart below shows the annual water usage by different industries.
The chart illustrates the number of
water
, including
groundwater
and public supply, used by
the
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a
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variety of
industries
in the same year.
According to
the figure, it can be seen that both types of
water
is
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are
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used by the chemical
industries
the most.
On the other hand
, the
industries
which
use
groundwater
and public supply the least are the machinery and the fuel/textile respectively. As it is presented, the chemicals
industries
use
public supply
water
the most with 240. Followed by the foods and drinks
industries
, just about 190. The
least
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last
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public supply
water
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of water
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is occupied by the fuel and textiles
industries
only at 10.
On the contrary
, the
groundwater
is used by the chemicals
industries
about 430 which is the most
compare
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to the others that
use
this
kind of
water
. The metal
industries
come second place with 240. The fuel and textiles
industries
use
almost the same amount of
groundwater
, at 70 and 80. Meanwhile, the machinery uses
gound
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ground
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water
less, only account for 10.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, groundwater, industries, use with synonyms.
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