The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did (unemployed, part-time employed and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the UK between 1985 and 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the average duration of housework women did

(unemployed, part-time employed and full-time) when compared to men who had full-time work in the UK between 1985 and 2005.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the time consumption of household females in various backgrounds when compared to the males who worked fully in the UK from 1985 to 2005.
Overall
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, it is noticeable that the data shows an upward and downward trend
at the end
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of the period.
In addition
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, jobless women still completely contributed the highest number of the figure,
while
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the ladder remained at the same level. In 1985, the unemployed females took up at 7 levels and the number went into a moderate decline, reaching 6.5 before it levelled off at the same point.
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, at the lower level, women who had a part-time job increased gradually to approximately 10% in 2005.
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, the remaining categories, encompassing males and females who worked full-time articulated the same tendency, in which their numbers grew slightly
at the end
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of the period, accounting for 1.5 and just below 3, respectively.
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