The charts below show the average consumption of three nutrients by adults in the UK. All of these nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
The given charts display the figure for the amount of
sodium
, saturated fat and added sugar
consumed each day by adults in the UK.
Overall
it can be seen that most factors are consumed highest at dinner except added sugar
which was consumed most in snacks. Besides
, in breakfast, the amount of consumption of three factors is lowest.
To begin
with, adults in the UK have breakfast with the lowest proportion of these factors, particularly 13% for sodium
and 16% for saturated fat as well as
added sugar
. At lunch, sodium
occupies the highest amount 28% of the total meals, followed by saturated fat and added sugar
make up 26% and 20% respectively.
Moving on to the other categories, sodium
and saturated fat are consumed highest at dinner with 42% for the former and 39% for the latter while
added sugar
accounts for 19% of total meals. Lastly
, daily snacks of adults in the UK contain 45% added sugar
which topped the list in total meals while
sodium
and saturated fat take up 17% and 19% respectively.Submitted by lethithut123 on
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