The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.

The pie charts below show the sources for UK tax revenue for last year and the total UK government spending for last year.
The pie charts display
regarding
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the percentage source for
tax
income
and spending in
UK
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last
year.
Overall
it can be seen that
income
tax
accounted for
majority
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the majority
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of the
income
,
whereas
pensions
calculated
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for
most
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expense
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. Looking in more detail, for UK
tax
revenue
income
tax
contributed
most
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for
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tax
income
than others at 28%. The other categories were much smaller, national insurance which
were
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second
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largest for
tax
revenue proportion at 21%,
then
followed by
value added
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tax
with little
different
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with the latter at 17%. Others share
also
take a part with
amount
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of percentage namely 11%. There were four
tax
revenues,
coucil
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council
tax
, business rates and fuel duty, which
accounting
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for 5%. In the meantime, pensions become
most
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aspect
in
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UK government outings at 20%.
Next,
it was followed by welfare, health care and education which had similar
proportion
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proportions
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, 17%, 18% and 14% respectively.
Then
, general government, transport, protection, defence, interest payment on
debt
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the debt
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, and other outings spent less namely no more
7
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%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words tax, income with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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