Both governments and individuals are spending vast amounts of money protecting animals and their habitats. This money could be better spent dealing with fundamental issues in society such as poverty and healtheare. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, more

money

is appropriated for caring for

animals

and their wildlife habitat.

However

, in many

counties

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, some

people

have essential issues

of

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life. Because they do not have a suitable financial

circumstance

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. Many of them require a home and earn more

money

. In

this

essay, I will describe my opinion

in

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which

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the

government

should be more considerate about the quality of

people

's lives. In many developed and developing countries, dogs and pets are protected by

people

and the

government

. It is so important for them to allocate an amount

as

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animal protection in the country’s budget every year. Because some species of

animals

are endangered, or they are threatened by poachers and hunters.

Therefore

, the

government

is committed to keeping and caring for all

animals

and their habitat.

Furthermore

, the conservation of

animals

worldwide needs too much

money

which should be covered and paid

by

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the

government

and

people

in these countries.

This

budget

sometime

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is equal to or more than the cost of education in some other countries.

Although

we must respect and protect

the

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wildlife and the environment, some men and women in the

world

do not have any suitable life and minimum

convenient

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. Unfortunately, some children in the

world

have been deprived of normal education and home life. In conclusion, these days many

people

spend a lot of

money

on their pets and some

animals

.

Also

, they

are organized

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some environmental groups

for protecting

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to protect

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them. In conclusion, there are many humans in our

world

who need food, home and other facilities. I believe that it is not worth spending

money

for

animals

when other

human

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in the

world

face

to

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too

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many

seriously

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problems