The diagrams show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.

The diagrams show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagrams show the coastal village of Seaville in 1980 and 2010.
The maps illustrate how the coastal village in Seaville developed over a period of 30 years.
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, it saw considerable growth, particularly in the establishment of new residential areas and recreational facilities. In 1980, there were holiday cottages and a hotel near a large marsh to the west of the site, where they were surrounded by a circled road. There was
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a river running from the sea to the south.
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the northern part was covered by woodland, the tea room and east bank were located in the southwest. Apart from that, the village was completely bare. In comparison, holiday cottages, which were carried to the southeast, and marsh were converted to permanent houses in 2010. The woodland in the north was deforested and replaced by a new golf course.
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, 2 new roads were constructed in the centre of the area.
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one of them was paved passing the northeast through the river, which was separated into 2 pieces, another one was connected to a new retirement village. The tea room and sand dunes along the sea were replaced by a new restaurant and a hotel.
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, a boat club was
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built in the vicinity of the river.

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