Some languages spoken by very few people are losing their importance and may become extinct. Is it a good or a bad development? What are the reasons for this?

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There are some languages in the
world
parleyd
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parleyed
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by tiny sections of the
world
. The significance of
such
dialects
are
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vanishing, contributing to their possible extinction.
Its
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a negative effect and a plethora of factors contribute to
such
phenomenon
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. In the contemporary era, many reasons can
ascribe
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to
such
development. People are trying to create a common medium of
communication
across the
world
. To establish
such
an instrument,
english
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became the most important
dialect
. Nowadays, most of the educational and official platforms use
english
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as a
communication
medium.
Thus
, some communities around the
world
who practise a certain
dialect
are avoiding their native languages to communicate.
Apart from
this
, the source of these linguistical varieties
such
as the literature
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not well-preserved. The cultural heritage is
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the brink of extinction for
such
dialects.
For instance
, when books written in
such
languages by highly qualified authors are lost, it
contribute
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to the vanishing of the
dialect
. Because, reading and deciphering
such
content leads to
the
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language development from the school days,
although
, schools do not have
these
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resources to continue
the
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communication
in
such
a
dialect
.
Moreover
, it has many shortcomings for the society on the whole. A myriad of cultural heritage is lost because of
such
negligence in
preservation
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the preservation
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of
a vernaculars
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a vernacular
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. People are losing their cultural identity which is reducing the uniqueness of their community.
Consequently
, the
world
seems very similar with no creativity left.
For example
, in India, people are using
english
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English
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for their official works and schools which is decreasing their grasp over their vernacular tongue. It will
subsequently
reduce their knowledge,
additionally
, they cannot impart the knowledge to
their
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next generations.
To sum up
, vernaculars create a sense of uniqueness and pride among communities,
however
, leverage for one
communication
medium worldwide is causing
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problems
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for other linguistic varieties.
Similarly
, there is
reckless
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the reckless
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attitude towards literature and culture. In a nutshell,
its
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it's
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a bad trend and can lead to
extinction
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the extinction
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of many vernaculars.
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