The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown leisure activities of Australian children
The graph
indicate
leisure Change the verb form
indicates
activities
of boys
and girls
between ages 5 and 14 with five distinct in Australian
.
Correct your spelling
Australia
Overall
, watching TV or videos are greatest lovely kind of activities
for both genders. Contra Fix the agreement mistake
activity
skatebording
or Correct your spelling
skateboarding
rolleblading
are Correct your spelling
rollerblading
most
lower figure.
Correct article usage
the most
To begin
, the number of watching TV and rolleblading
are elite for both Correct your spelling
rollerblading
of
Change preposition
apply
boys
and girls
aged of
5 and 14 chosen by all participle. Bike riding and Electronic or computer games are similar Change preposition
apply
statistic
for every Change the noun form
statistics
person
Change noun form
person's
aged
. Bike riding was selected as a popular activity Replace the word
age
Change preposition
by appoxiemetely
appoxiemetely
75% of Correct your spelling
approximately
boys
and for a little while
of
60% of Change preposition
apply
girls
. Meanwhile, the figure
Fix the agreement mistake
figures
of
Change preposition
for
electronic
and Replace the word
electronics
computer
are 80%and 60% respectively.
Despite Fix the agreement mistake
computers
of
the fact, Change preposition
apply
sketbording
or rollerblading and Correct your spelling
skateboarding
Art
and Fix the agreement mistake
Arts
craft
Fix the agreement mistake
crafts
wre
the most leat favour Correct your spelling
were
are
actictivities
compared to others. We can see Correct your spelling
activities
sketbording
and rollerblading Correct your spelling
skateboarding
preffered
Correct your spelling
preferred
activities
of boys
appoxiemetely
38% chose Correct your spelling
approximately
it
Correct pronoun usage
them
while
just 22% of girls
preffered
Correct your spelling
preferred
it
. Same as arts and Correct pronoun usage
them
craft
Fix the agreement mistake
crafts
can
shows 55% of Verb problem
apply
girls
enjoyed with
Change preposition
apply
this
Change the determiner
this activity
these activities
activities
but only 25% of boys
like
Wrong verb form
liked
it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words activities, boys, girls with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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