The diagram below shows two different process of manufacturing black tea.
The diagram below
illustrate
thatChange the verb form
illustrates
,
how black Remove the comma
apply
tea
is produced.
The process of tea
harvesting and black tea
production starts with the harvesting of tea
leaves and turns
into black Correct subject-verb agreement
turn
tea
in stages
To prepare black tea
, first,
fresh tea
leaves are picked
. At Rephrase
first picked
this
stage, only the upper and fresh leaves are used.In the next step, the leaves are exposed to dryers that remove 60% of the water from the tea
leaves.
In the next step, the tea
leaves are divided into two groups, some of them are rolled and some of them are cut. In this
step, the leaves that are rolled
.The leaf enzymes are removed from it and the leaves that are cut are prepared faster.With the help of oxidation, the composition of tea
leaves changes, and with the combination of air and enzymes, the color
of the leaves should be changed to a copper Change the spelling
colour
color
, and Change the spelling
colour
finally
, by placing the tea
leaves in an oven and dryer and being
exposed to heat, 97% of the water in the Unnecessary verb
apply
tea
leaves It is removed and black tea
is obtained.Submitted by rahaaa1325 on
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