The diagram below shows two different process of manufacturing black tea.

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that

,

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how black

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is produced. The process of

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harvesting and black

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production starts with the harvesting of

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leaves and

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into black

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in stages To prepare black

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,

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fresh

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leaves are

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. At

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stage, only the upper and fresh leaves are used.In the next step, the leaves are exposed to dryers that remove 60% of the water from the

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leaves. In the next step, the

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leaves are divided into two groups, some of them are rolled and some of them are cut. In

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step, the leaves that are rolled .The leaf enzymes are removed from it and the leaves that are cut are prepared faster.With the help of oxidation, the composition of

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leaves changes, and with the combination of air and enzymes, the

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of the leaves should be changed to a copper

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, and

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, by placing the

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leaves in an oven and dryer and

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exposed to heat, 97% of the water in the

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leaves It is removed and black

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is obtained.