The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
#centre #paris #company #restaurant #area #two #locations #summarise #information #features #comparisons
The map conveys the
two
locations in the centre of Paris to choose where the new restaurant will be located.
Overall
, there is only one river called 'The Seine river
' and Capitalize word
River
the
one metro station, Correct article usage
apply
two
banks; the right and the left, three bridges; the Bir-Hakeim bridge, the Debilly footbridge and the lena
platform, Change the capitalization
Lena
two
parks at
Change preposition
on
the
each side of Remove the article
apply
banks
, and five sightseeings which are popular to visit, as sports centre, the art gallery, the Eiffel tower, the aquarium and the Maritime museum.
The first place stands at the west part of the right bank and near the left side of the park Correct article usage
the banks
that
is located on the same bank. Correct pronoun usage
which
Also
, the
option number one is between Correct article usage
apply
two
bridges as
Bir-Hakeim and Lena. Change preposition
apply
Moreover
, this
variant is not far from museum
, where the number of visitors Add an article
the museum
are
the Change the verb form
is
most
Correct word choice
highest
in
Change preposition
on
this
side.
The second future eating house stands on the left bank, extra nearly to the Eiffel tower
. Capitalize word
Tower
Additionally
, this
point is going to be popular among people who want to enjoy the Eiffel Tower and eat after such
emotions. Also
, there is a metro station that will be very convinient
for restaurant comers.Correct your spelling
convenient
Submitted by akzharkynzhamal on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
▼
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
▼
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
▼
Vocabulary: Replace the words two with synonyms.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "stands" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
▼