The graph below gives information about the preferred leisure activities of Australian children. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown leisure activities of Australian children
The bar graph provides data about the proportion of five types of exercise that juveniles preferred in Australia from 5 to 14 years old.
Overall
, it can be seen that boys were more likely to participate in 3 out of 5 movements, except for arts and crafts and watching TV or videos.
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To begin
with, the biggest interests for boys were TV or videos, with both genders of children choosing to play them. Linking Words
Additionally
, electronics or computer games, bike riding, and skateboarding or rollerblading were the biggest hobbies of boys, with around 80%, 68%, and 39%, respectively. Linking Words
On the other hand
, the biggest proportion of girls attending the action can be seen in arts and crafts, with almost half of the differences portion.
Meanwhile, the children seem to have the same interests in watching TV or video, as evidenced by the percentage of times they participated in both workoutLinking Words
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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