The charts below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevan
The given charts provide extensive data about the percentages of the three main purposes of water usage including agricultural, domestic and industrial in diverse four countries in 2000.
At first glance, it is apparent that there was an
overall
superiority of agricultural consumption all over the world, as well as
India and New Zealand in terms of countries.
Looking into details, firstly
, agricultural using
ranked in first place with 70%,followed by the utilisation for the industry with 22%. Replace the word
use
Although
domestic consumption ranked in last
place for the global rates at 8%, it also
had a significant role in Canada at 80%.
Turning to countries, utilizing for agriculture reported in first place for both China and India at 69% and 92%, respectively. Then
, the percentages of domestic and agricultural usage in New Zealand and Canada were almost the same by a margin of 2% and 4% in turn. After, using for industrial purposes was the least ubiquitous one in India and New Zealand with 3% and 10%, respectively.Submitted by bhoswriting on
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