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the maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day

the maps below show the changes in the art gallery ground floor in 2005 and present day
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The given plans illustrate the differences in the ground floor layout of the art
gallery
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 between the past (2005) and the present day.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the art
gallery
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 has undergone numerous modifications, particularly on the left
side
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 of the floor plan.
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, several elements have been added to enhance accessibility for disabled visitors, including the installation of ramps and a lift. In 2005, the receptionist was located at the centre of the art
gallery
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, with stairs positioned towards the rear
side
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 of the building. On the right
side
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, there were three
exhibition
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 rooms. The left
side
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 consisted of
exhibition
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 room 4, a
gallery
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 office, and a cafe. Currently, an entrance hall has been introduced, and the receptionist has been relocated closer to the entrance door. Additional ramps have been installed in front of the
gallery
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,
while
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 a lift has been added at the back, making the
gallery
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 more universally accessible. The stairs have been moved to the left, and the former cafe space has been transformed into a
gallery
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 shop.
Exhibition
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 rooms 1-3 remain unchanged,
whereas
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exhibition
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 room 4 has been replaced by a children's area and a temporary
exhibition
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 space.
Furthermore
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, the former
gallery
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 office has been repurposed to accommodate vending machines, which can be conveniently accessed from the entrance hall.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words gallery, side, exhibition with synonyms.
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