The graph below shows the percentage of female students on four different courses at one university from 1970 to 2015.
The line graph illustrates the proportion of female university students
on
four subjects at a university in the Change preposition
in
45 years
period, between 1970-2015. Correct your spelling
45-year
Overall
, three
courses show an upward trend throughout the period, Correct article usage
the three
while
only the law subject experienced a downward trend.Submitted by NA
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