the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the changes in the floor plan in a central public library between 20 years ago and the present.
According to
the picture, it is clear that
a majority of the plan
have changed, Fix the agreement mistake
plans
However
, it is not only the proposes for each room
, but the room
has also
been expanded.
At the
first glance, the two tables and several chairs that used to be located in the middle of the library were removed. On the left side of Correct article usage
apply
this
facility, there was an expansion of CDs, videos and computer games and
changed Correct word choice
apply
it
into Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
Correct article usage
a
room
for storytelling events which included 2 more added sofas and fiction books
for children. The aisle in the middle was adjusted from adult fiction books
into
all reference Change preposition
to
books
. The reading room
from the past became a computer room
.
On the right-hand side of the plan, A Lecture room
replaced the room
that was keeping children's books
. An adult non-fiction books
area was rearranged and became adult
fiction Correct article usage
an adult
books
area with an information desk and some self-service machines. An enquiry desk was demolished and replaced by a new cafe.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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