the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

the diagram below show the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrates the changes in the floor plan in a central public library between 20 years ago and the present.
According to
the picture,
it is clear that
a majority of the
plan
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have changed,
However
, it is not only the proposes for each
room
, but the
room
has
also
been expanded. At
the
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first glance, the two tables and several chairs that used to be located in the middle of the library were removed. On the left side of
this
facility, there was an expansion of CDs, videos and computer games
and
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changed
it
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into
the
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a
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room
for storytelling events which included 2 more added sofas and fiction
books
for children. The aisle in the middle was adjusted from adult fiction
books
into
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all reference
books
. The reading
room
from the past became a computer
room
. On the right-hand side of the plan, A Lecture
room
replaced the
room
that was keeping children's
books
. An adult non-fiction
books
area was rearranged and became
adult
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an adult
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fiction
books
area with an information desk and some self-service machines. An enquiry desk was demolished and replaced by a new cafe.
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