Computer and A.I technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enhance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Online education is witnessing an increasing
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of A.I technology and computers.
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, artificial
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can greatly aid
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in gathering resources for study
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brainstorming for ideas,
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I believe excessive utilization of A.
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will result in a passive attitude of learning for
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. It must be acknowledged that robots are one of the best multi-tasking tools.
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artificial
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, computers are great at processing and giving information.
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means that
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can widely take advantage of its functions to come up with ideas they find difficult to understand.
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, those ideas can be explained thoroughly if it is given to the computer to analyze.
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, these tools have become widely spread to help
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essays and
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homework.
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, Chat GPT has more than 75.000 users, and half of them are
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looking for solutions to their difficult questions.
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, teachers are finding the
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of these technologies annoying and may possibly have an effect on the
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’ attitude
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learning. In most cases, artificial
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users
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as
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often feel dependent on the tool.
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,
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their grades might improve, their
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understanding of the academic subjects may suffer serious problems.
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, a survey done on the knowledge of
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in one university in London states that 80% of those who
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Chat GPT
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the subject but still pass with the minimum score. In conclusion, artificial
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and computers may be
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great
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students
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who want
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ideas
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on how to solve their problems.
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, relying on these tools may have negative effects leading to a passive attitude of learning for
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Task Achievement
To further enhance your essay, consider expanding on the impact of AI on various learning styles and how it could be tailored to benefit a broader spectrum of learners. This addition could provide a more nuanced perspective on AI's role in education.
Coherence & Cohesion
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Task Response
You presented both sides of how AI can influence education effectively, maintaining balance throughout your argument.
Coherence & Cohesion
Your essay structure, including a clear introduction and conclusion, made your arguments easy to follow.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • personalized learning
  • adaptive learning
  • learner's pace
  • AI-driven analytics
  • targeted instruction
  • interactive content
  • virtual reality
  • automate
  • administrative tasks
  • human interaction
  • social skills
  • data privacy
  • over-reliance
  • critical thinking
  • problem-solving skills
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