The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010

The provided table illustrates the milk production in a year in four countries (Netherlands, Australia, Tanzania, Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010
The given data shows the change in the annual
production
in one year in four different nations namely the
Netherlands
, Australia, Tanzania, and Guatemala) in 1990, 2000 and 2010 measured by
litres
Overall
,
while
the
production
of
Netherlands
, Guatemala and Tanzania show an increasing trend, the figure for Australia declined over the given period.
But
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However
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throughout the process, the
Netherlands
still was the largest
production
of
milk
. In 1990,the
production
of the
Netherlands
was higher than other nations at 11,262,000
litres
of
milk
,
then
dropped mildly to 11,155,000
litres
of
milk
in 2000 before reaching a peak at 11,466,000
litres
of
milk
in 2010. The figure for Tanzania was much lower than that in the
Netherlands
. In the first period with 87,000
lites
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litres
of
milk
then
dramatically from 142,000
litres
to 155,000
litres
of
milk
over the 10 years from 2000.
Likewise
, the quantity of
milk
production
showed an upsurge to more than double in 2000 to reach 55,000
lites
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litres
from 26,000, and it considerably improved to 84,000
litres
in 2010.
In contrast
, the annual
milk
production
rate in Australia had a steady downward trend from 11,246,000
litres
in 1990 to 9,165,000
litres
in 2010 after reaching 11,105,000 in 2000.
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  • milk production
  • trends
  • economic development
  • growth rates
  • leading producer
  • technological advancements
  • policy changes
  • climatic conditions
  • global impact
  • dairy industry
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