1)Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: ● Say why you would like to go on the trip ● Suggest what you could do to help during the trip ● Ask other questions about the trip
Dear Mrs.Smith,
My name is Natallia Krasna. I am the mother of Yana Krasna from the 3rd grade. I am writing to you to ask about an upcoming three-day school tour to another country that I would like to join
along with
the class because I might be very helpful during it and make the journey more pleasant.
This
is the first outside-the-country trip for the class, and I believe my presence will make it less stressful for the children. I am familiar with most of them and their parents, hence
, it might be comfortable for them to have a familiar face on this
trip. Besides
, I used to travel with my older child, thus
, I know what to expect in such
a situation and I have experience in organizing children and occupying them during the travelling.
If you agree for me to go with the group, I would like to ask a few questions, please. Has the dates of the trip been confirmed? I need them to take days off during this
period. Has the plan of the journey been done? I would be really grateful to see it, please, in order to think of possible activities during the tour.
I look forward to receiving your response.
Yours sincerely,
Natalia Krasna.Submitted by natallia.khrenava on
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