You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The maps below show the changes of a school from 1985 to present time. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The plans illustrate the past layout of a
school
in 1985 and the layout at the present time. Overall
, it is apparent that the school
has undergone particular modifications due to
the growth of student populations, including the addition of classrooms
, recreational facilities, and the road.
In 1985, at the front of the school
, there was an entrance and exit door , with a spacious rectangular-shaped car park in between. There is an office located at the entrance gate, with a library behind. Moving on to inside, a small car park was present along the road that reached towards playing fields at the back of the school
, with classrooms
on either side.
Currently, most of the schools'
facilities have been demolished and replaced. The car park and the road have been modified to a curved shape, Correct your spelling
school's
while
the office remains unchanged. The size of the playing fields has been reduced to house a learning resources centre, classrooms
, and a fitness centre with a pool on the left side in the plan, while
the classrooms
have been upgraded to 3 storeys, also
the additional classrooms
have been added on the right.Submitted by nnatthinee on
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