You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing
this
letter to get permission to join a training course
‘business expansion with technology’. I read about this
course
last
week in the local newspaper.
Nowadays, advancement in technology plays a vital role in improving the financial condition of firms. A relentlessly lucrative course
is going to be conducted related to this
field on May 1, 2024, in the local library of Collingwood, Ontario. I am interested in joining this
course
‘business expansion
with Correct your spelling
Business Expansion
technology
’ To improve my analytical skills.
Capitalize word
Technology
This
course
will be conducted in the nearest town, it will cost me $2000 for 3-day sessions, thus
I want our company to cover this
enrollment fee for me. I also
require my job letter to admit
Wrong verb form
be admitted
in
Change preposition
to
this
course
to improve my skills.
I think that these sessions will espouse
me to our company ‘GM digitals’ to new heights with an increase in sales and excellent services to customers. Verb problem
encourage
Although
I have a good grip on digital equipment, I still want to join this
course
to clear some doubts and gain more innovative skills.
I hope you will grant me permission to join it and subsequently
my fee will be covered.
Yours sincerely,
Navneet Kaur.Add a comma
subsequently,
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coherence cohesion
Try to use a range of cohesive devices to connect your ideas more smoothly and clearly.
task achievement
Make sure the introduction clearly introduces the purpose of the letter.
task achievement
In the conclusion, a brief summarization of your request and expression of gratitude could make your letter more polite and rounded off.
task achievement
Your letter successfully addresses all parts of the task, providing clear details about the course, the assistance needed, and how it will benefit your job.
coherence cohesion
The structure of your letter is well-organized, with each paragraph focusing on a specific point.